Today we are offering critiques on first kiss scenes. We want to see five hundred words of emotion packed writing giving us a glimpse of how the relationship might change because of their decision.
Depending on the writer, a kissing can be any length, especially when its great. So, if your scene is longer than 500 words we leave it up to you whether we see the lead up, the kiss or the aftermath.
How it works:
* Post up to 500 words of your first kiss scene as a comment to this message. If you go a little over that is ok. Also include a working title.
* During the week, your first kiss scene will be copied, removed from the blog, and critiqued by at least 5 of our members.
* On Friday 19th February we will repost all critiqued first kiss scenes to the blog.
This is NOT a contest - there are no prizes and no winner - just honest feedback delivered in a nice way.
To ensure your privacy, reposted work will not include any author names and you may post more than one work for critique.
Any questions? Just post them as a comment and we will get back to you.