Today we are offering critiques on the scene where the hero and heroine first meet. We want to see five hundred words of emotion packed writing giving us a glimpse of how the relationship might develop from the first encounter. Is it a comedic (cute) situation or is it life threatening or something else entirely? It is one of those moments that could really re-grab the reader?
Please keep the scene to 500 words and try not to let the two meet since next month we are going to ask you to submit the first meeting.
How it works:
* Send up to 500 words of your scene to ladyscribes (at) yahoo (dot) com. Also include a working title.
* During the week, your scene will be copied and critiqued by at least 5 of our members.
* On Friday 16th of April we will post all critiqued scenes to the blog.
This is NOT a contest - there are no prizes and no winner - just honest feedback delivered in a nice way.
To ensure your privacy, reposted work will not include any author names and you may post more than one work for critique.
Any questions? Just post them as a comment and we will get back to you.